some disgusting terminology
Feb. 12th, 2020 02:04 pmIt's not easy to fight even a mildly bad mood writing about excrement and corpses. Something I thought would be a "smallish chapter" (as I wrote to
thanatos_kalos just a few days ago) turns out to be a serious chapter called "imagery of disgust" and OMG, you wouldn't believe the amount and variety of it I have to deal with.
Anyhow, I'm actually only writing this to have some distraction and also to ask - and I am sorry about this - is there a word you would use to describe hm... animals eating human corpses? Sorry-sorry-sorry! I did warn you, right? Yeah... so, if you're still here... I can write "eating dead bodies" but any meat is a dead body... or "eating corpses"... but in Russian, say, there is a special word for that - for eating flesh from corpses that were found dead, as opposed to the ones that were killed to become food. Is there anything in English? Human flesh? From corpses???
For the really strong ones, here comes the context: There was cholera, many people had died, the living ones were afraid of cholera, so they buried the dead ones in shallow graves, so jackals came, dug out the corpses and ate them. Phew. Sorry. Do you understand now, what I meant with the first sentence?
Anyhow, I'm actually only writing this to have some distraction and also to ask - and I am sorry about this - is there a word you would use to describe hm... animals eating human corpses? Sorry-sorry-sorry! I did warn you, right? Yeah... so, if you're still here... I can write "eating dead bodies" but any meat is a dead body... or "eating corpses"... but in Russian, say, there is a special word for that - for eating flesh from corpses that were found dead, as opposed to the ones that were killed to become food. Is there anything in English? Human flesh? From corpses???
For the really strong ones, here comes the context: There was cholera, many people had died, the living ones were afraid of cholera, so they buried the dead ones in shallow graves, so jackals came, dug out the corpses and ate them. Phew. Sorry. Do you understand now, what I meant with the first sentence?
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Date: 2020-02-12 12:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-02-12 12:30 pm (UTC)Still, they don't appear in the same instances! Thank you! I had no idea.
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Date: 2020-02-12 01:34 pm (UTC)Wicked creepy story idea, by the way! We had a major cholera epidemic in my hometown back in the 19th Century that wiped out over half the town, so we had to study it in high school and I've found it super interesting ever since. Are you writing a horror book or a historical novel or...?
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Date: 2020-02-12 01:53 pm (UTC)The place I live in and the things I do make me far too easily googlable and I do try to stay anonymous on DW, so no details in open posts.
I can say this much: it's not a horrible fantasy, it's all true. *scary smile*
Anyhow, thank you for the academic term, I need those, too!
I keep confusing things I know about you. Is you hometown in the US or the UK?
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Date: 2020-02-12 02:10 pm (UTC)I'm in the US; it's a tiny and very peculiar area with tons of dark history (cannibalism, mass murders) and tons of easily-Googleable creepy names XD This isn't the exact name, but the town was originally named something similar to "Witch's Broom" and the general area is named something similar to "Devil's Swamp," both of which are super odd names for the U.S.
We have both cholera and bubonic plague graveyards, and I think both diseases were kind of rare here, though cholera was more common back then.
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Date: 2020-02-12 02:31 pm (UTC)But even just for reading your posts - it's nice to have a context. Makes everything more vivid and creepy)))
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Date: 2020-02-12 01:41 pm (UTC)You could say that the jackals began "feeding on" the corpses. Or something like, "Jackals later dug up these shallow graves and began ravaging the corpses." (To "ravage" is simply to violently destroy, but in this context, I think it would be clear that the manner in which a jackal would destroy a corpse would obviously be by eating it.) The best phrasing sort of depends on what sort of sentence(s) you're trying to write, though. The term "human flesh" could also work, depending on context.
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Date: 2020-02-12 01:56 pm (UTC)I feel like we should compare notes. :D
How is it going, by the way?
Thank you for the suggestions, they're all going to be used!
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Date: 2020-02-12 04:24 pm (UTC)I'd been in the midst of taking a break from writing in order to prepare for my trip to Hong Kong, but, uh. I guess I'm going to have to just get back to writing again, now. *sigh*
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Date: 2020-02-20 12:34 pm (UTC)Yeah, I'm sorry about that :/
It's all greek to me
Date: 2020-02-12 01:49 pm (UTC)Re: It's all greek to me
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Date: 2020-02-20 06:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-02-20 08:51 pm (UTC)let me know if you need help, will you?
i like feeling useful 😉
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Date: 2020-02-12 06:38 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-02-12 07:45 pm (UTC)Oh, I'm sure. That's a subject I know a lot about.